Giving it a Shot

This story is about a girl named Lauren thinking that her family are all winners because it sees on the shirts and it’s about her running

but she comes third place because she didn't try. But her dad thinks that she should do more sports and go to the gym more often.

This story takes place at her School, School Courts, At Her Room, and her House. The characters in this story are Mum, Dad, Lauren, Other Students, Other Racers, and Nina. I liked this story because her dad encourages his daughter to get more thin like the other girls at her school. I also liked this story because she doesn't care.  

Friday Night Out

Walt:We are learning how to write a review

Friday Night Out By Kathy Taylor.

This story is about Max, Jason, and Campbell going to town because it was a Friday night out for the boys. They went downtown to go to the Cake Tin Stadium but Max and Jason tried to flirt with two girls and they got Campbell out of the way by sending him to the food stalls.

The two girls thought that Max and Jason’s little brother Campbell was more attractive  than them.

The characters in story were Jason, Max, Mum, Campbell, The Dark Haired Girl, and The Tall Girl. There were also other people but they weren't really the main characters in this story.

This Story took place around and in the Cake Tin Stadium.  

I liked this story because it was really funny when the girls liked Campbell instead of  Max and Jason. I also liked this story because the Max and Jason could not meet the girls again because their plan did not work when their mum was there to pick them before they could leave Campbell and go to meet the girls again.

Memories

Story Review by Jahsiah

Memories by Anna Kenna

This story is about Sophie’s Memories about her Mum and her pony. She remembered the day that her Mum was on her feet and some of the things she did for the family.

This story takes place in Sophie’s Room and outside her house.

The characters in the story are Mum, Dad, the Pony, and Sophie.

The problem in this story was that Sophie was agitated because

her mum told her to do something and she didn't want to do it.

I liked this story because it was an interesting but sad  because Sophie didn't get time to do things with her mum as she used to when her mum was not in a wheel chair.